She thrashed again, sharp breaths coming ragged between her teeth. I felt her fish around for something in her pocket. She has a history of keeping things in her pockets that poke her endlessly while making out. She pressed a shiny object into my hand. I glanced at the small folding knife.
"A nuisance?" I asked.
She fought her eyes into focus. "A hint," she hissed.
I snapped the knife open and smiled.
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I got a delicious shiver reading that last line. Very hot stuff
xx Dee
Comment by Curvaceous Dee — January 4, 2008 @ 3:16 pm
Thanks, Dee. I enjoyed it a great deal, too.
Comment by Victor Alcazar — January 5, 2008 @ 4:47 am
Silly comment: I keep having this urge to post comments as “Uncurvy Dee.”
More serious comment: I love finding that I’m not the only person who writes these.
Comment by Demonezade — January 15, 2008 @ 12:06 am
“Uncurvy Dee”? *smile*
(Jagged Dee? Angular Dee? Acute Dee? Pointy Dee?)
I did pick up the habit from you. (At least, of doing it online.)
Comment by Victor Alcazar — January 16, 2008 @ 4:44 am
*flushes*
Comment by misskitty_79 — January 16, 2008 @ 2:33 pm